Theme: ‘SCI-FI SHOOT-EM UP’
Narrative Design Document
Dialogue Samples
These cutscene dialogues helped me understand more about each individual character’s traits and voice, as well as how they interacted with others.
Discovery:
Jian comes across footage of Daitan going into Dot’s room and taking her medication, as well as taking Jian’s gas mask from his room.
Daitan walks through the door.
Jian: Where have you been?
Daitan: Nowhere. I just… needed to get some air.
Jian: Right. Care to explain this? (he gestures at the paused image of Daitan on the screen). I thought you said you had no idea how Dot’s medication or my mask ended up in your room.
Daitan: I don’t… it’s hard to explain. Can we talk about this in the morning? (she starts to go towards her room).
Jian: (Incredulously) I just found footage of you clearly lying to all of us and you want to talk about this in the morning?
Daitan: Jian, please…
Jian notices how disoriented and restless Daitan is.
Jian: Why do you have your hands behind your back?
Daitan closes her eyes and takes a deep breath in.
Daitan: I… killed someone.
Tension:
Jian: We decided it would probably be best if you stay at the base while we take care of it.
Dot: Considerin’ what’s been goin’ on with you lately, we figured it would make the most sense. Don’t take it personal darlin’, we just want to keep you safe.
Daitan: (disbelief) You want to keep me safe? It sounds more as though you don’t want me with you.
Dot: It’s not that, honest. A lot of weird stuff’s just been happenin’ lately, and we want to try and minimise that.
Daitan: I can’t believe this. (she turns around and puts her hands on her hips)
Jian: Dai, be reasonable. We’re not trying to gang up on you, we just think that this-
Daitan: Oh really?
Jian: Really. We don’t know what other solution there is right now. What happened on the last mission… we… I just don’t want it to happen again. I’m worried about you.
Daitan: And you think leaving me here is going to help how exactly? (she crosses her arms)
A few seconds of silence go by.
Frankie: (Quietly) We think this is the most fair solution. This mission is important, we do not want you to…
Daitan: Compromise it?
Frankie: I did not say that…
Daitan: You didn’t need to.
“In-game Archaeology”
I wrote 4 audio logs in my own time to build upon this game world. I collaborated with a few different voice actors, please check their work out as well!
SADIE JARVIS:
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Twitter: @Jarvdusa
Storyboards
Daitan under control
CRAIG WOOD:
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CRAIG WOOD:
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Varia Chernova
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Email: chernovagames@gmail.com